RIPE APPLES!!!

Once there was an apple tree
he had very ripe red apples
all the other trees had rotten apples
the young tree was like young people
and the others were like old people
The young tree felt sad for the others
so he gave his apples to the others to grow
the others didn't want to take the apples
but he felt obligated to let the others have nice apples
all the trees were happy and had grew nice ripe apples.

Hometown project Alex Mishark 4A

My hometown is very important to me in a special way that nobody on this Earth will understand. In this picture that I chose it shows the state capital building of Lincoln, Nebraska. If you want to know why I chose this picture to represent my my hometown then I would recommend you read this passage.

     The first reason why I chose this picture of the Lincoln, Nebraska is because of the wonderful sights and beautiful smells. I could hear the massive rushes of cars go by and the wonderful smell of there gas and diesel rushing out of there pipes. I could also see the loads of people and kids going in and out of the wonderful building, but the down side of that is that you could smell their body odor. When you go there you would have a great time if you liked to be around a bunch of people. There are so many people that it is like sitting in a full bus of kids, some people might not like that. For me that would be my dream. I love to be in big cities and places with a bunch of people to see.
    

Advertisment Analisis

     In this "Dentastix" advertisment it tried to show people that dogs breath is naturally nasty smelling.  With this advertisment it made those dog sticks seem like a great idea.  Through this advertisment it showed you about tone and purpose.
     There were two main tones used in this advertisment. The first tone was humorous. The humor was shown by the dead bird in the cage with the dog breathing on it.  The second tone used was silliness.  It was silly, because the dog had such bad breath that the bird had died.
     The purpose of this advertisment was to show that dogs breath can be very nasty. They tried to show this with the dead bird in the cage, and the dog breathing on it.  They also were trying to say that the sticks were better than regular bad breath.  They tried to show this with the dog breathing without the sticks.
     One can conclude that with the dentastix a dogs breath would be much better smelling.  The point of this advertisment was trying to get the reader to buy the stix which makes dogs breath much better smelling than normal.  I believe that if dogs breath is as nasty as it says then I might want to try these dentastix.

I Am Poem

I am funny
I wonder when I will have a nice car
I hear the wind blow by
I see a blimp in the sky
I want to play pro baseball
I am the 12 best archer in high school in the world

I pretend to drive in NASCAAR
I feel a mountain in Colorado
I touch the snow in Nebraska
I worry about being grown up
I cry when I watch Marley and Me
I am amazing

I understand when people love to text
I say alot of bad works when nobody is around
I dream about skydiving
I try to be good at baseball
I gope to be richer than now
I am good at bseball